There are many pieces in a picture book that can affect comprehension, but missing important cultural implications or text references can be one of them. In many historical fiction books, students, especially students who are learning English in addition to another language that they speak at home, may have a difficult time understanding a book when they do not understand the context that a book is written in. Different events were important to different cultures, which means that all students may not have the same knowledge and background information about each time in history. For this assignment, I chose two books that are based on true events or stories, as I find that these books are particularly hard for ELL students to understand since history may be taught differently depending on cultures.
The books I chose are:
Pink and Say by Particia Pollacco (1994, First Scholastic Printing)
Pink and Say is a book about two boys who became friends while they were both fighting in the Civil War. It describes their journey through the war, especially because Pink is black and he is fighting for his own freedom. This book talks about the importance of working together and being courageous, even though the boys are young. This book takes place in the south, during the war, so all of the language is southern dialect. In the end of the book, while the boys are fighting for their freedoms, they are captured and taken to one of the worst Confederate Army camps. They are separated forever. The last page of the book states that Say, who was white, was released from this camp months after he entered, but he was very skinny and sick. Pink was hanged hours after he was taken into camp and his body was thrown into a pit. It turns out that Say turns out to be a very distant relative of Patricia Polacco, who is the author of this story.
Rough, Tough Charley by Verla Kay (2007, Tricycle Press)
Rough, Tough Charley is a non-fiction book written in short, rhyming poems about a child named Charley Parkhurst who is an orphan. Charley was sleeping in a barn, the owner found him, and he began working with the owner's horses making sure that they were taken care of. As Charley grew up, he learned how to drive stagecoaches and transport people safely to where they needed to be. Charley was always a safe driver and on time, but many people gossiped about him saying that he was vulgar, odd, and that he was fancy-dressed. Charley, throughout his life, faced many hardships. A horse kicked him in the eye, making him blind in one eye, and he saved his passengers and loot in the stagecoach by killing a bandit. After Charley retired from driving, he joined a gentleman's lodge and was able to vote for presidents. Charley became very sick when he was older, but insisted that no doctor came. When Charley died, everyone was shocked to find out that Charley was actually a woman. Charley disguised her identity her entire life so that she could participate in the same luxuries that men could. She wanted to vote for presidents, drive stagecoaches, and simply be equal.
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Pink and Say, this book is written in a southern dialect that is very hard for most students to understand. It is written this way to show the authenticity of the Civil War in the south, but this is especially hard for ELL students to understand, since they still are acquiring correct English.This book is written as a conversation between two friends, and is filled with southern slang. It bridges the gap between academic and conversational language, yet that it is hard for ELL students to understand that academic and conversational language can be combined into one. Students are beginning to understand that "academic language is the language of the classroom" but when they see that academic language and conversational language are combined, this can be quite confusing (Hill and Flynn, 2006, p.17) This language in itself is hard to understand, since we do not often speak using phrases such as "ridin' drag and lookin' for wounded" (Polacco, 1994, p.5). Exposing all students, especially ELL students, to this dialect and giving them opportunities to hear and practice speaking in this dialect can help them understand that authors use different styles of language when they are trying to portray different time periods, parts of the country or world, or characters. This will help my students "activate prior knowledge" about a subject during other lessons, which is so important for ELL students (Hill and Flynn, 2006, p. 7).
Pink and Say also is written during the Civil War. The book talks a lot about the Union and the Confederate armies. Without adequate knowledge about the Civil War or this time period, students may not know about these armies or what they were fighting for. These vocabulary words are crucial to the book, as Pink and Say end up in a Confederate Army at the end of the book. To teach these concepts, I might show a picture of a Confederate flag and a Union flag. I could also show the students pictures of a Union uniform and a Confederate uniform so they know that these two armies were fighting against each other. Identifying the similarities and differences between the two uniforms allows students to "make new connections, experience new insights, and correct misconceptions" (Hill and Flynn, 2006, p.12). It also might help to show the students a map of the United States during the Civil War and explain to them where the different armies were fighting against each other. Also on the map, I could explain which states were part of the Confederacy and which were part of the Union. This would help students by "enhanc[ing] [their] ability to represent and elaborate on knowledge using mental images" (Hill and Flynn, 2006, p.7). Exposing students to images would help them recall information when they see this same topic in the future.
This book is also written at a higher level, and is filled with complex vocabulary. Polacco uses words such as, "mahogany, bluffs, smote, lad, marauders, and muskets." Before reading this book, the students should be familiar with the vocabulary that is important to understanding this book. They could preview the words and activate their prior knowledge about these concepts. They could converse with their peers around them and discuss what they already know about specific vocabulary words in this text. This cooperative learning would allow students to "make sense of new knowledge by interacting with others" (Hill and Flynn, 2006, p.9). Students could also learn about these new vocabulary words by acting out or illustrating what the words mean. For example, students could write the word mahogany and then use a brown crayon to illustrate that mahogany is the color brown. Giving students the chance to act out or illustrate their new vocabulary words helps these new ideas sink in even more.
The last component in
Pink and Say that ELL students might have a hard time relating to is location. There are many different locations throughout the United States mentioned throughout the book that many students might not be familiar with. Many of my students rarely get the chance to travel, let alone to many of the places mentioned throughout the book. Polacco mentions "our farm in Ohio, the slave plantation, places associated with Yankees, Andersonville, and Saranac, Michigan." I could locate the places mentioned in the book on a map for my students so they have a visual of where this book takes place. I could also give the students an opportunity to talk with their classmates about the places mentioned in the book to see if they have any connections about these places that might help them make more sense of these aspects in
Pink and Say.
Rough, Tough Charley is written in cryptic rhyme, which is a form of poetry. An example of this is the very first stanza where Verla Kay writes, "Charley, orphan/ Runs from town/ Hides in stable/ Hunkers down" (2007, p.1). This rhyme could be hard for ELL students to understand just because the language is so broken up and different than the way we actually speak. This style of writing contradicts intermediate and advanced fluency, which is something that teachers hope their ELL students will achieve (Hill and Flynn, 2006, p.15). To teach the choppy idea of telling a story through poetry to ELL students, the students could recite the story itself, taking the text of the story as a "script" of sorts for reader's theater. Giving students the opportunity to become fluent with poetry, which is a text that they aren't as familiar with, does give them the chance to understand meaning by internalizing the content. They take ownership of the story, since they are directly interacting with the script. This will help them understand the story even better, and it will also positively impact their fluency, as it gives them time to practice reciting words in a dramatic setting.
Rough, Tough Charley also focuses a lot on different vocabulary than we use today, since the story takes place in the 1800's. There are many new words in this text, such as, "stagecoach, stable, reins, steamship, and petticoats" (Kay, 2007). To teach these words that students may not be famiiliar with, I would give the students the definition of the words before we read the story so that they have some background knowledge as they encoutner these words. Then as we read the story, I would show the students a picture of a stagecoach, for example, so that they are able to visualize how these new vocabulary words can relate to the story. Again, using non-linguistic representations help students "not only understand material better but also recall the knowledge more readily" (Hill and Flynn, 2006, p.7). This is important so that students are able to add new vocabulary words to their language base.
Many pictures in
Rough, Tough Charley show Charley driving a six-horse stagecoach, voting for presidents, or working as a child. Many of the events that Charley engages in throughout the book, my students have never done. Giving them the opportunity to look at the pictures and talk about their own experiences of when maybe they have seen or interacted with horses and what that was like may give the students a better understanding of the important components of this book. Again, when students are able to talk about their own experiences with each other, it strengthens their background knowledge or interest in a specific topic.
The most important thing to understand in
Rough, Tough Charley is the big surprise in the end of the story. Students need to understand that the main idea of this story is that Charley is actually a girl and disguised her identity so that she was equal and had the same freedoms men did during this time. History is such an important aspect of this book, and students really need to understand that women were not treated as equals during this time because they were seen as fragile and delicate. At the very end of this book, there are two pages titled "Facts About Charley." Reading these pages to the students and then giving students time to discuss their feelings or reflect about this story could help students really understand that Charley had to take drastic measures to ensure that she was guaranteed the same freedoms that men were.
I would also make sure to talk about the setting in
Rough, Tough Charley, as it is set in the 1800s, in the country and in the stables, and it is different than most of the students in an ELL classroom might have seen before. Providing students with background knowledge about these places would help them understand more completely when we do go to read the book. I could do this by reading books about the 1800s or times when stagecoaches were used. We could also talk as a group about why people did have to use stagecoaches or even talk about how history has changed, which touches on one of the History Standards. Students might also want to talk about their personal experiences as well.
Rough, Tough Charley and
Pink and Say are both excellent texts that students can learn a lot from. Teachers just need to make sure that they teach the aspects of these books that may be hard for children who grow up in different cultures or who come from various backgrounds so that all children feel successful when comprehending a text.